Penname: pained4you [Contact]
Real name: Naomi
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Member Since: Aug 27, 2016
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My name is Naomi. I am the youngest sibling of 8 brady bunch children. I am also a mother of a wonderful 5 year old boy. My hobbies include reading, writing, being sarcastic, and boring my other half to death with magical details of Harry Potter. I also admin a Facebook group that is all about Ms. Hermione Granger.


Reviews by pained4you
 
Summary:

The Fates have given Salazar Slytherin the opportunity for a second chance with some major strings, including making one Hermione Granger happy. Hermione is more interested in her work than dating. (Written for Hermione Smut Round Six - Prompt #75) No under-eighteens, please. COMPLETE.


Published: Oct 25, 2016 Updated: Oct 25, 2016
Categories: Brightest Witch of Her Age, Brightest Witch of Her Age > Hermione/Salazar
Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Read Count: 25;
Word count: 10949



Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE this. I have always been a fan of Salazar/Hermione and this definitely doesn't let me down.

I loved all the small details. They really made it.

I laughed out loud at the thought of anyone actually saying to Minerva that she shouldn't be left alone. Luckily he said it to Snape instead.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Hermione takes advantage of an invite to the Malfoys' ball to do some detective work on the ever slippery and shady Lucius Malfoy. But things do not go to plan. Not even remotely.

Power dynamics, sexual politics, polyjuice hijinks and plenty of hot, angry sex... must be a Lumione smut-fic! Rated M for mmmm...


Published: Oct 25, 2016 Updated: Mar 10, 2017
Categories: Brightest Witch of Her Age, Brightest Witch of Her Age > Hermione/Lucius
Warnings: Dubious Consent, Infidelity
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Read Count: 272;
Word count: 37838



Reviewer: pained4you Signed
Date: Oct 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Play Cissy For Me

Wonderful first chapter! I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Head Over Heels In Hate With You

I truly loved this chapter. 

That ending 'it's nice to know I wasn't the only one...' made me giggle 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: A Fox Is A Wolf Who Sends Flowers

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Hot

Go Hermione! 

Another wonderful chapter!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: How To Tame Your Malfoy

I love the back and forth between them. The dialog is really wonderfully written. It really makes you feel the playfulness, the frustration, and the triumph when they talk to each other. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Pain And Pleasure In Equal Measure

Incredibly well written! 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: What A Tangled Web We Weave (When First We Practise To Deceive)

I'm really emotionally pulled into this. What an anxiety filled chapter. Marvelously written. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: The Devil Be Flame

Another amazing chapter

I wonder if Narcissa picked up on her husband's jealousy over Hermione 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: What You Shouldn't Do (When Doing What You Shouldn't)

Every time he says 'good girl' it sets my teeth on edge. Poor Hermione. 

I still can't believe how much I get brought into this fic. It's written wonderfully.

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Win Or Lose, You Lose

Oh no. What could her stipulation be? I have to find out. 

Excellent chapter 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: From The Sublime To The Oblivious

I might have gasped audibly when I read the last line. 

Incredible chapter 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue: Gentlemen Gracefully Saunter

I can't believe it's over. 

What a perfect ending. 

I thought it was destined for heart break but instead I'm left giggling at the journey Hermione doesn't know she's about to go on. 

This whole fic was perfect 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your lovely reviews Naomi! I didn't get an alert for them in my inbox, so only just realized when I logged in today. 

I really appreciate you reading and reviewing, that means so much! 

xox Rosie

 
Second Time Around by Witch Nova Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Feature

When an accident in Potions class leaves Severus Snape's adult mind trapped inside his sixteen year old body he fears that his life will be as unbearable as it was when he was first in his teens. Help soon comes however from an unlikely source.


Published: Dec 12, 2016 Updated: Dec 31, 2016
Categories: Brightest Witch of Her Age > Hermione/Severus
Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Read Count: 403;
Word count: 164948



Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: All Change

omg. I am loving this! The chapter was so long I have no idea which part I loved most!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The Hand of Friendship

Aww! I loved the ending to this chapter!

I hope he is able to settle in soon.

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Cuckoo

Another amazing chapter!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Of Halloween and Hexes

wow. what a powerful chapter.

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Abracadabra

Oh, my. Was it Sirius? I bet it was Sirius.

Lovely chapter!

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Ticket Outta Loserville

awww. what a great ending to the chapter. 

really enjoying this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story xx

 
Summary: Feature

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Hermione finds herself with the two LeStrange brothers at her mercy. What is a girl to do


Published: Dec 26, 2016 Updated: Dec 26, 2016
Categories: Brightest Witch of Her Age, Brightest Witch of Her Age > Hermione/Rabastan/Rodolphus
Warnings: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Read Count: 1269;
Word count: 114264



Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I still can't believe that I've never read this before. Such an amazing first chapter. It's really pulled me into the story. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I absolutely love this chapter. The detail of the bugs and bites made my skin crawl and itch. 

Very vivid and detailed writing. I really am loving it. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww. This story just keeps pulling me in. I wonder if they'll recognize the house elf. 

 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Another excellent chapter. Your writing style is really amazing. I love it. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Does Hermione not know yet that they've regained ownership of the house? 

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I'm glad Harry apologized to Hermione. 

Lovely writing as always. 

 
Reviewer: pained4you Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww. It's too cute that they each choose a room on each side of Hermione's. 

I'm really loving this. I can't believe I haven't had this in my life before now. 

 
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