Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 23, 2017 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

Look out! Here comes the bravest and brightes witch of her generation! I'm still a bit uncertain about Hermione and Draco. It doesn't feel right, I still think it was rape, no matter how pleasant Narcissa and Draco made it for her. In real life... I wonder. War turns normal on its head.

Elena

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 23, 2017 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

Crap and more crap!

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 23, 2017 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Not at all what I thought. Draco a double agent, hmmm. Don't envy Hermione or Draco.

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 13, 2017 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh crap! Why does it have to be Hermione the weakest? Why isn't she more enraged? Draco and his mother lied to her, used her, continue to use and she is barely seething with rage. Maybe I expect too much too soon. Frustrated and curious.

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 13, 2017 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

Okay, this is a bit better. I just expected more wrath from Hermione but sadly it didn't happen. I thought she was going to mourn her friends, I mean, she remembered which means she must have gone throught the loss and the pain again but nothing. And of course she isn't as repulsed by Draco as she should be. But I'm interested. I want Draco to suffer and for it to come from Hermione.

Elena

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 13, 2017 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 2

So Narcissa made Hermione pliant and eager by giving her a potion. It's kind of the same thing as giving something to a woman in a bar and then rape her. Not only that but now Hermione think of the man who has done this as her protector. How are you going to make me belief that Draco has a good side? Is the real, feisty, honorable Hermione, the one that would rather die than allow Draco to use her in such a despicable way, ever going to appear? Not sure if I will continue, however, is early still in the story.

Elena

Reviewer: eterna-romantica03 (Signed) · Date: Jul 13, 2017 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

As long as this story is not too dark or Draco rapes Hermione and then she forgives him, I might be able to continue. Marriage Law fics are hard for me and dark ones even more so because of the amount of angst. Voldemort won and Draco is on the winning side. This can only mean Draco has been part of the many atrocities committed against Muggles and Half-bloods. Will be very hard for me to find any redeemable qualities if this is case. So on to the next chapter.

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